7th July 2022

My written down wordscape,
full of unright,
attracts red ink,
cos it’s mostly shite,

As personal slanders,
and barbs to me,
these clip-on-ear-ections,
harsh comment’ry.

I’m trying my bestest
but I struggle to care,
study-tude’s not good,
n’it’s showing right there.

But who gives a carp,
they know what I mean,
it’s all too ultracorrect,
this literscene.

Gonna retreat to my numbers,
no point fighting,
with these savage reviews,
on my garbage writing

Prompt: Neologisms (new words). .


Lightning Deterrent (eaves detail), Forbidden City, Beijing,


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